OOC NOTE
This RP is based after the events that transpired and the Alliance's jump into the system. Everything picks up right where we left off, I just want a bit more order, and I want it to be the big, epic battle I originally planned it on being.
Rules
All posts must be clean, well spaced, minimal errors, and no sentence fragmenting. There must be sufficient numbered words, and it must be easy to understand. No ridiculous kills either, I think I shall set a 200 word minimum per post.
The Story
<font color=red>The withdrawl of the Yuuzhan Vong flotilla left a hootering cheer in all the spirits around the massive battle, but to say that it was a victory was truly a lie. There were close to no losses from the strang aliens, and the fact that they had destroyed a Super Star Destroyer and countless other war craft was leaving a damp taste in the mouths of those around them. Still there were two remaining Vong Cruisers, but certainly not enough to take on entire warfleets.
Warmaster Zhin Dwamor had left personally aboard his Worldship Yamka with the great War Coordinator, the Yammosk. It was uncertain where the Praetorite Vong had fled to, but it was certain that they had not finished with Ylesia, if anything they had just begun.
And even now, the battle rages on the ground between the two forces, Yuuzhan Vong...Gand...human...Mon Cal, all together in one ferocious combat in an attempt to decide who would truly take the planet.</font>
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The Chazrach and Vong had pulled themselves off of the Storm trooper and Mon Cal forces in what appeared to be almost a retreat. The commander had been slain, and the Yuuzhan Vong now looked up to one of the warmaster's own kin, Captain Teledak Dwamor. The Rogue Imperial forces had not bothered giving chase to the fleeing Vong, but rather prepared themselves for another, potential onslaught by their forces.
The Mon Cal generals had been made aware that several armored vehicles and a good thousand or so more Yuuzhan Vongh had been dispatched approximately five hundred klicks out, and could possibly unite with the Vong. That is...if they could find them.
Teledak Dwamor currently was in the lead of the fleeing warriors, and after losing a good hundred Chazrach and forty warriors, he knew massive onslaught was going to get them nowhere. With their prefect killed...well, it seemed the gods were not so esteemed as the Warmaster had imagined.
They fled deep into the mountains, where the Rogue Empire had not bothered chasing, and it brought a hint of joy to the Vong, knowing that they could set up quite the military installation there to defend themselves should the infidels choose to pursue at all.
Amongst the twisting, turning caves that they had sought refuge in, the several hundred Yuuzhan Vong warriors that had been taken with them sneered with angry snarls at the Warmaster's kin for ordering the withdrawl, their thirst for blood outweighing their hunger for survival.
"You took away our victory Teledak!" one of the warriors cursed, specifically insulting the young Yuuzhan Vong by calling him out by his first name. Teledak Dwamor shot him a deciding glare, which managed to cease any more pointless jabbering or finger pointing.
"We canno stand here and point fingers, the infidels were more ready than we expected,"the commander growled, slamming his fist into the cave's wall, smeering blood against it and shattering stone from his mighty thrust. "We came here to recuperate and launch a major offensive that will gain us more honor and crush their lines without the possibility of reinforcements on their part."
"But why flee? We were ready to die there!"one of the warriors spoke up, standing from one of the cold, marbel rocks.
"And makes yourselves useless for the upcoming battle? Why die foolishly in the first wave when you can die with honor in the assault that crushes them?"
There was a lingering silence about the formerly empty caverns as the commander did indeed have quite a point. He felt his lips curl into a sneer at the thought of dishonor through retreat...it was not a cowardly retreat, it was organization.
"How many Chazrach were returned?"he demanded suddenly.
It took a moment, but one of the intendent's rose and bowed before the commander. "Potent One, we have found that one hundred seventy two remain of the two hundred dispatched."
Stroking his chin, the Warmaster's kin pondered those odds.
"We shall formulate a strategy using these Chazrach."
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Commander Yultook was in command of the two remaining Light Cruisers who had been renamed Incarnate and Desperation for the time being. Hundreds of turbo laser shots managed to smeer out from the enemy craft, but were easily dodged or absorbed by dovin basals. The faster moving craft even managed to void themselves away from the enemy craft, allowing the turbo lasers to collide against the opposing craft, such as MC300 that the leader of the Mon Cal was aboard.
Plasma was shot back in return, but not at full scale, rather attempting to scare the infidels out of attempting to destroy them. It would not work in the long run of course, but it would work for the time being.
Commander Yultook cast a glaring stare on the Yuuzhan Vong priests around him, whom had simply ceased their chanting to the gods, which had particularly enraged him. But he needed to divulge in the combat situation, as to come out with the greatest possible glory for Yun-Yuuzhan.
Peering at the polygonal arrays of his command chamber, the commander fought hard to keep from breaking his own teeth through the forceful gritting he insued. There was a bulbuous gurgle from the ship itself as more yorik coral blasted off from turbo laser blasts.
"Bring the ship around behind that giant one,"[b]he ordered, feeling himself foremostly insulted by the abomination. It was the largest, mechanical station and battle ship he had ever seen, it was foreboding the greatest insult possible. To fight with such mechanical terror truly forbade righteousness.
There was a gravitic anomaly, the opening of a quick wormhole, and then the transmerging behind the mighty Archammer. With the Incarnate using its dovin basals to keep the fools from hyperspacing out, and was far enough away to keep from being blasted apart by the rivaling fleet.
Due to its incredible size, the Archammer prooved to be a perfect shield, and the blasts from all the fighters, New Alliance, Iron Fist, Rogue Imperial, and Mon Cal alike began eating away at the shields on it. Of course it was only menial damage, for the moment, it was still enough to annoy the craft.
And with the dovin basals eating away at the rear shields, the engines were slowly making themselves prime targets for plasma damage by the light cruiser. The infidels were unlike the Yuuzhan Vong...where they were to depend on propulsion and ionic mass, thus creating blindspots in their huge ships...like the Archammer, who could fire maybe one or two laser blasts every once and a while at the Yuuzhan Vong cruiser, whereas they could blast at all times in all places.
Furthermore they proved to be a perfect shield...it was no doubt completely annoying the Admiral aboard the Eclipse-Class Super Star Destroyer.
This RP is based after the events that transpired and the Alliance's jump into the system. Everything picks up right where we left off, I just want a bit more order, and I want it to be the big, epic battle I originally planned it on being.
Rules
All posts must be clean, well spaced, minimal errors, and no sentence fragmenting. There must be sufficient numbered words, and it must be easy to understand. No ridiculous kills either, I think I shall set a 200 word minimum per post.
The Story
<font color=red>The withdrawl of the Yuuzhan Vong flotilla left a hootering cheer in all the spirits around the massive battle, but to say that it was a victory was truly a lie. There were close to no losses from the strang aliens, and the fact that they had destroyed a Super Star Destroyer and countless other war craft was leaving a damp taste in the mouths of those around them. Still there were two remaining Vong Cruisers, but certainly not enough to take on entire warfleets.
Warmaster Zhin Dwamor had left personally aboard his Worldship Yamka with the great War Coordinator, the Yammosk. It was uncertain where the Praetorite Vong had fled to, but it was certain that they had not finished with Ylesia, if anything they had just begun.
And even now, the battle rages on the ground between the two forces, Yuuzhan Vong...Gand...human...Mon Cal, all together in one ferocious combat in an attempt to decide who would truly take the planet.</font>
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The Chazrach and Vong had pulled themselves off of the Storm trooper and Mon Cal forces in what appeared to be almost a retreat. The commander had been slain, and the Yuuzhan Vong now looked up to one of the warmaster's own kin, Captain Teledak Dwamor. The Rogue Imperial forces had not bothered giving chase to the fleeing Vong, but rather prepared themselves for another, potential onslaught by their forces.
The Mon Cal generals had been made aware that several armored vehicles and a good thousand or so more Yuuzhan Vongh had been dispatched approximately five hundred klicks out, and could possibly unite with the Vong. That is...if they could find them.
Teledak Dwamor currently was in the lead of the fleeing warriors, and after losing a good hundred Chazrach and forty warriors, he knew massive onslaught was going to get them nowhere. With their prefect killed...well, it seemed the gods were not so esteemed as the Warmaster had imagined.
They fled deep into the mountains, where the Rogue Empire had not bothered chasing, and it brought a hint of joy to the Vong, knowing that they could set up quite the military installation there to defend themselves should the infidels choose to pursue at all.
Amongst the twisting, turning caves that they had sought refuge in, the several hundred Yuuzhan Vong warriors that had been taken with them sneered with angry snarls at the Warmaster's kin for ordering the withdrawl, their thirst for blood outweighing their hunger for survival.
"You took away our victory Teledak!" one of the warriors cursed, specifically insulting the young Yuuzhan Vong by calling him out by his first name. Teledak Dwamor shot him a deciding glare, which managed to cease any more pointless jabbering or finger pointing.
"We canno stand here and point fingers, the infidels were more ready than we expected,"the commander growled, slamming his fist into the cave's wall, smeering blood against it and shattering stone from his mighty thrust. "We came here to recuperate and launch a major offensive that will gain us more honor and crush their lines without the possibility of reinforcements on their part."
"But why flee? We were ready to die there!"one of the warriors spoke up, standing from one of the cold, marbel rocks.
"And makes yourselves useless for the upcoming battle? Why die foolishly in the first wave when you can die with honor in the assault that crushes them?"
There was a lingering silence about the formerly empty caverns as the commander did indeed have quite a point. He felt his lips curl into a sneer at the thought of dishonor through retreat...it was not a cowardly retreat, it was organization.
"How many Chazrach were returned?"he demanded suddenly.
It took a moment, but one of the intendent's rose and bowed before the commander. "Potent One, we have found that one hundred seventy two remain of the two hundred dispatched."
Stroking his chin, the Warmaster's kin pondered those odds.
"We shall formulate a strategy using these Chazrach."
****************************************************
Commander Yultook was in command of the two remaining Light Cruisers who had been renamed Incarnate and Desperation for the time being. Hundreds of turbo laser shots managed to smeer out from the enemy craft, but were easily dodged or absorbed by dovin basals. The faster moving craft even managed to void themselves away from the enemy craft, allowing the turbo lasers to collide against the opposing craft, such as MC300 that the leader of the Mon Cal was aboard.
Plasma was shot back in return, but not at full scale, rather attempting to scare the infidels out of attempting to destroy them. It would not work in the long run of course, but it would work for the time being.
Commander Yultook cast a glaring stare on the Yuuzhan Vong priests around him, whom had simply ceased their chanting to the gods, which had particularly enraged him. But he needed to divulge in the combat situation, as to come out with the greatest possible glory for Yun-Yuuzhan.
Peering at the polygonal arrays of his command chamber, the commander fought hard to keep from breaking his own teeth through the forceful gritting he insued. There was a bulbuous gurgle from the ship itself as more yorik coral blasted off from turbo laser blasts.
"Bring the ship around behind that giant one,"[b]he ordered, feeling himself foremostly insulted by the abomination. It was the largest, mechanical station and battle ship he had ever seen, it was foreboding the greatest insult possible. To fight with such mechanical terror truly forbade righteousness.
There was a gravitic anomaly, the opening of a quick wormhole, and then the transmerging behind the mighty Archammer. With the Incarnate using its dovin basals to keep the fools from hyperspacing out, and was far enough away to keep from being blasted apart by the rivaling fleet.
Due to its incredible size, the Archammer prooved to be a perfect shield, and the blasts from all the fighters, New Alliance, Iron Fist, Rogue Imperial, and Mon Cal alike began eating away at the shields on it. Of course it was only menial damage, for the moment, it was still enough to annoy the craft.
And with the dovin basals eating away at the rear shields, the engines were slowly making themselves prime targets for plasma damage by the light cruiser. The infidels were unlike the Yuuzhan Vong...where they were to depend on propulsion and ionic mass, thus creating blindspots in their huge ships...like the Archammer, who could fire maybe one or two laser blasts every once and a while at the Yuuzhan Vong cruiser, whereas they could blast at all times in all places.
Furthermore they proved to be a perfect shield...it was no doubt completely annoying the Admiral aboard the Eclipse-Class Super Star Destroyer.