A New Hero
Posts: 43
  • Posted On: Jul 23 2006 12:01am
"Ok lets get this plan in motion." Dorn said.

The soldiers go into transports and got everything needed for this battle. The guardsmen zipped up Dorns bodybag and he was thrown over someones shoulder.
Posts: 421
  • Posted On: Jul 23 2006 12:19am
I don't like this idea at all, thought Max.

"Razr Orbital Command? Max here!" Max said into his portable radio.

"ROC here. What can we do, sir?" came a reply from ROC.

"I need a fleet to protect Razr now. It's needed now." Max said then he turned off the ROC station and headed off for a great battle.
  • Posted On: Jul 23 2006 12:49am
Annie was going to make sure Dorn was safe she was suppose to stay on the celing of the building and shoot out anybody who was threatening Dorn's life.She had a sniper rifle with a silencer.If Dorn died it would be all her fault.
Posts: 43
  • Posted On: Jul 25 2006 8:02pm
Dorn was ready for this all he needed was for the "hoods" to open up the body bag and then turn around for a second so he could strangle one. As soon as he got the first one he would start to take down the guards around the prisoners. Then he would signal for the troops to roll in.

He felt the guardsmen drop him on the floor and then his foot steps began to travel away. "This is the moment" Dorn thought taking a deep breath ready to get going.
Posts: 421
  • Posted On: Jul 26 2006 4:39pm
Max still didn't like the plan, but he knew it already started and that meant if he wanted it to end. It would end the way he didn't want. Max watched Dorn be rested by the guardsmen, and Max ducked under the rock to wait for what would happen next...
Posts: 421
  • Posted On: Aug 16 2006 6:02pm
The enemies came out and took the bag in with them, but first made several squads of men check the exterior of the towers.

Apparently they expected this, as Max said this, he ran out from his cover and started shooting at the men, he then saw fire coming from behind him on his sides, which showed eith there were men back there or his men acknowledged his movement, Max continued to run towards the small group of men now whilst shooting them, finally he pulled out his sith blades and started cutting them down.

Finally, Max and the troops had finished off the exterior guards, they heard Annie was still covering Dorn with her men too. Max ran in and went through the halls, ussing the bird's eye view map of the tower he had of every floor, and the tracking device Dorn had swallowed earlier. Max followed the path the men and Dorn were taking.

Max finally caught up to them and ordered his men to stand down while he sneaked up to them and knocked the one holding Velvok out. WHAM! The man fell down and Max pulled Dorn behind cover and unzipped him,a nd then gave him a blaster, max ran to the men and started to attack them.

"This was not how the plan was s'pose to work, you know that, Max!" Dorn hollered to max over the blaster fire. "Have you gone totally nuts?"

"Yes. In fact I have, and of course I knew that, but I did not feel like having to wait, too boring," Max looked back at Dorn and smiled, right after he had cut down the final attacker by decapitating him. "Let's hurry!"

They all ran down to see the man behind all of this.

"Hello, Dorn? Max? and is that... who are those people behing you men?" the man asked. "Oh well, let's fight!"

After that, Max, Dorn, the guardsmen, Annie, and the others. With the enemies of course, engaged each other in a fierce battle. Max instantly ran to the head honcho of this predicament, and engaged in a sword fight, or a duel, whatever you want to call it. Max swung low to the Man's shins, but the man hooped up and max had to block a swing to his own neck by the honcho ham. Max swung his sword which was blocked by HH and then the man fell down, max looked up to see Annie, with a blaster in her hand pulling it down.

What Annie and Max had done had inspired the germanicans, and they fought on, slicing down men, and shooting, and everything between until there was no more.

"We have captured Razr completely!!!!!!" yelled all the germanican grays towards the sky.

"Yes! We have done it, congratulations, men, but just in case, let's search the perimeter, and eliminate anybody who shoots at us!" Max said to his troops. "Come on, do not just sag there, let us go prove we are the best!"

(OOc-This thread is closed, it must have at least 6000!!!!!)