A New Hero
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  • Posted On: Jun 30 2006 5:44pm
"Sir, they're coming straight at us!" cried the Gray officer. "Bee-boop-bzzzzzz!" echoed R4-A2.

"Don't worry, you two! This baby can do anything!" encouraged Max, the leader of the Grays. "Can it destroy a Executor-Class Star Destroyer?" countered the Gray officer. "Don't know, even if it couldn't we would still win because we aren't going against a Super!" laughed Max.

There were the strange people they had encountered on Razr, and they had nifty ships!

Lord Max, there are to many! We only have your personal starfighter and our Germanican Cruiser. They have a strange transporter that I estimate could carry about 100 starfighters!" winced the Gray officer.

"Well you aim for the transporter and me and R4 will get the starfighters. Once you're done with the transport release the Deltas and have everybody attacking these fighters." insisted Max."Any questions?"

"Yes, sir,"said the Gray, but then realized the other end had turned off their comm system.

"You ready, R4?" asked Max and his reply was a reluctant hum that said yes.

"Woo-hoo! Let the Deltas fly!" screamed Max excitedly. "We need more fighters now! Release the rest of the Deltas!


"Only need to destroy 25 more of these men!" informed the Gray officer to Max.

"I'm done. I'm coming in and we can watch the Deltas win!" yelled Max
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  • Posted On: Jun 30 2006 6:12pm
"What? They have more, Lord Max!" yelled the Gray Officer. "What? Where? Where are they?"asked Max. "right on your tail! They...have cloaks, but there are only 3 squads of 12!" yelled the Lieutenant Colonel.

"I'm not going to let my men die! I'm going back, whether you care or not, I want you to help!" ordered max in a serious tone. "I'm going to make these men wish they have never lived!"

"Sir, they are exploding...it's, incredible they are just magically exploding! We're going to win this battle!" cheered the Lieutenant Colonel. "We're going to win! Yes! We're finally going to win!"

"Not yet, that was only one squad, we still have twenty-four fighters left!" said Max in a emotionless tone.

"This battle is far from over men! Very far!" said Max in the same voice.
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  • Posted On: Jun 30 2006 9:15pm
"Send in Admiral Velvok and the reinforcements, now!" yelled Max into his comm unit."Get Dorn!"


"Yes, sir?"came a voice that Max knew as his good friend Dorn.

"Dorn we need you to help us take out these fighters, there are hundreds more!"

"Yes, sir,"said the powerful voice of Dorn,"I'm coming to save your butts!'
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  • Posted On: Jul 2 2006 3:50am
"heh, looks like Max is in some trouble..... lets go help him shall we?" Dorn said as he motioned to the helmsmen.

"Give em all the fire support we have!" Yelled Dorns 2nd In Command
Right as he yelled the order the weapons control officer fired all available turbo laser cannons.

"Keep firing until we can launch all fighters!" Dorn barked at the Weapons Officer. The lasers destroyed a few enemy squads here and there but not as many as he needed taken down.

"All fighters are about to launch. Shall I give the order?" Dorn's 2nd Asked.
"LAUNCH!" Dorn yelled as he slammed his fist down on the control planel.

"Max, I'm sending all the fighters i have to your position. You have complete control of them." Dorn proclaimed. "Is there any capitals you need taken down?"
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  • Posted On: Jul 2 2006 2:48pm
"No, Dorn," Max replied to the Admiral,"You're doing good...what is this? There are a few squadrons coming towards us, no wait...there are a lot more and they have a new ship coming in it appears to be a destoyer of some type!"

"Yes, Admiral Velvok, I give you all permission to engage on the destroyer! First, contact gero and tell him to send us in a new transport. Also tell the old transport to leave! Any questions Dorn?"asked Max as fast as he could.

"Take two of our Delta Squadrons and attack the destroyer. With out the destroyer the squads will be forced to surrender. Why? They have no hyperengine to enter hyperspeed and without that they'll need to fight to their death or surrender."Max reported to his left wingman.

"Stick with me to the end!" Max joked to the right wingman."And Dorn...try not to scare them off!"
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  • Posted On: Jul 3 2006 6:30pm
"No Questions here sir. Scare them off .. ha I just want to play with them alittle. Admiral Velvok out." Dorn turned to his 2nd. "Already on it sir!"
Replied Dorns 2nd.

"Gero, send a new transport and send the old one out." Dorn's 2nd barked out. "Ok sir orders have been sent."

"Very good. Now let us engage that destroyer. Weapons, I want all the firepower you can muster on that destroyer. I want 2 squadrons on Max and the rest concentrate on the remaining fighters. Helm, put us under that destroyer. We want to take out the hangers and life support, then take out the engines. Understood?" Dorn planned out carefully.

"Yes sir!" immediately replied everyone on the bridge.

The ship slowly moved through the battle raging space towards the destroyer.
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  • Posted On: Jul 3 2006 6:45pm
I hope Dorn is doing okay. Of course he is, he's my Admiral. The best! thought Max assuring himsel that Dorn was okay. Gero, my brother and the former leader of the Germanicans, he will get the order Dorn sent him, he will! Max assured himself yet again.

Max noticed all the fighters that Dorn had sent and smiled.


"Dorn?" Max said into his comm hoping Dorn would answer.

"Yes?" came the few months ooldeer man's voice.

"You know...we're going to win this thing! You can calm down, but still be alert. I don't want to have to mess up the ground burying you!" joked Max hoping it would calm Dorn down. "You okay?"
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  • Posted On: Jul 3 2006 7:06pm
"heh ok... you know these guys can shake me haha. Wait you burying me? Please if i go down we all go down hahaha. I've got a plan to take down that destroyer... we're moving into position now to execute it now." Said Dorn cooly.

"2 squadrons of my best should be with you now. They will give you cover and pick off any thing that gives you trouble. And Gero says that he's carrying out the order as we speak." Dorn said as he saw the transports moving.
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  • Posted On: Jul 4 2006 4:22pm
"Incredible...you're doing absolutely incredible!" replied Max."Uh-oh...the destroyer its acting strange, god i hope it isn't going to kill us in one blow!" joked Max hoping to get a response."Max out."

Just then Max saw two Delt Advance Squadrons fly next to him and start picking off fighters. Wow...quite a bit of fighters we have, but we need them thought Max while shooting down one whole squadron. "52 enemy fighters left and 1 destroyer." came command down on the planet.

What? thought Max Gero was only suppose to send 1 transport to us, not 2 and 3 squadrons of Gauntlet fighters!

"All Beta Superiors aim fire at fighters!" ordered Max into his comm unit.
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  • Posted On: Jul 4 2006 8:23pm
(OOC-Dorn, I'm max's brother, he is watching me right now making sure i don't lie to you. He wants to let you know I'll be cooperating in this thread along with you and him. So have fun, we'll both be taking part in the same ship.)

Trever was with Dorn listening to Max and Dorn conversing about the battle. Trever was always interested in war. He was introduced to it by his brother Gero and was brought into it by his other brother Max.

Admiral Trever was under command of Grand Admiral Dorn Velvok. The only capitol the Grays had was a Alpha Destroyer called the Dealing Dragon a ship under command of the Grand Admiral. Trever is jealous he is part of this ship instead of fighting in his own Delta Aethersprite Advanced 117 showing Max he could be the Grand Admiral.