For future references...
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  • Posted On: Oct 16 2009 8:43pm
I apologize for misunderstanding parts of your post, though I think my guys would have rather fled than die for a hollowed-out rock...

A. creating a backstory for the attack on Gestalt
C. Using your desire to remain 'hidden', soldiers not telling where their homeworld is as a means of increasing/confirming Remoran suspicions of your people's evil ways (I mean, if you were on the up and up, why hide?)


This is completely understandable, and I fully support it.

B. Having a bit of fun at your expense with your propensity for laying mines all over the friggin place.


This one, not so much. There are mines at chokepoints and strategic points within the route. But these are Wraith-class Pulsemass Mines (except directly within a couple kilometers of the station), meaning that they don't do anything to ships in subspace, unless you tamper with the stealth mine and activate its self-destruct. As I understand it, the ship destroyed had only sublight capabilities.

Directly around the hidden station (everything is retractable into the station so that it can hide, as noted within the R&D...) there are some more standard mines used across the galaxy and the Shadowwrath-class Proximity Mine. I'm assuming that this is the mine type you were referencing, given that otherwise the only thing we're dealing with are dozens of laser cannons or starfighter-grade ion cannons. None of which are likely to pose a threat to such a large starship as described...

Of course, this is assuming that the starship has managed to successfully navigate through the asteroid field in which the station(s) is hiding...




Like I said, for future reference. Like Ahnk, I would prefer to be consulted if an R&D or a Confederate unit is going to play a central part within a plot point.
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  • Posted On: Oct 16 2009 8:58pm
Nevermind.


I'll rewrite it.
Posts: 1865
  • Posted On: Oct 16 2009 9:27pm
Omnae
Nevermind.


I'll rewrite it.


If I were you, I wouldn't rewrite it.

What's done is done, and I can live with what's written.

I can tell that you've put a lot of work into it, and more than a few unique ideas. I appreciate that, especially given that that's my weakness as a writer. I just would like people in general to be a bit more cautious about referring to my creations, because I'm a jerk, sort of.

I'm mostly a jerk because everything I do tends to be completely detailed to a fault, and it's all terribly uninteresting to read through. It's easy to miss minor details in all of it. And most of all, completely difficult to work with a thread like Cataclysm, because IC, the Confederation is basically devoted to maintaining the status quo of its member states. Thus, its IC qualities run completely counter to what Cataclysm is all about.