Coruscant
Admiral Kroth looked down at the report again, then back up at Theren, then back to the report. He seemed to be making some sort of judgment that required a careful comparison of the commodore to the datapad in his hands. “Unless you’re thinking about setting me up with that datapad, I don’t see why this is taking so long,” Theren said sarcastically. “I’ve already been debriefed.”
“Yes,” Kroth said absently, evidently ignoring what Theren was saying. Finally, he looked up. “It would seem that you rather effectively dealt with the situation in the Koornacht Cluster. And garnered us a rather impressive work force… I assume that a proper Imperial industrialization has begun?”
“Do you find it difficult to read?” Theren said in reply, and once again, Kroth did his best to ignore it.
“Needless to say, Imperial Command continues to be impressed by your efforts. You have been extremely successful in your recent endeavors… more successful, I daresay, than anyone else in the fleet.” Kroth set the datapad down after one more look. “The territory you have captured includes Bastion, Dantooine, Kamino, Karfeddion, Belsavis, N’zoth and J’t’p’tan. Quite an impressive list.”
“Yeah,” Theren said, shifting uncomfortably.
“I’ll be frank, Commodore. Your prowess has caught the eye of a number of high-ranking officials, who have begun asking questions about why you are only a commodore. I seek to rectify this situation.” Theren didn’t respond for a moment, and Kroth, perhaps assuming Theren not to have understood, added, “I am offering you a promotion.”
“To what?”
“Rear-Admiral. You will be placed under a new, larger command, and offered more… opportunities, to display your prowess.”
“I see.”
They sat there a moment more, and Kroth further prompted Theren. “Well?”
“Give me a day to think about it.”
In the ranks of the Empire, success did not equate to promotion or esteem. Grand Admiral Thrawn had managed to carve out an immensely impressive holding during his time as a servant of the Empire, yet had never escaped the classification he’d been allotted immediately upon his discovery; non-human. Less than human. Had it not been for the interference of the Emperor, he likely would have been left a captain for most of his life.
Classifications are, in the end, what it amounted to. Aristocrats with no intelligence and no talent were promoted to Vice-Admirals and given grand, symbolic commands to flaunt. Brilliant tacticians born in the slums of Carida commanded Corellian Corvettes. Tornel, Theren’s aide and the son of a wealthy Muunilistian banker, had once elaborated on this.
“You’re – no offense – what they call a low-class person. You weren’t born into the rungs of power. You weren’t even born into a position where the rungs of power were available for you to climb. You don’t have an Imperial accent; you don’t have wealthy, aristocratic, or military parents. That you were a scholar at one point doesn’t help either. You’ve got nothing, in their eyes.” Tornel had been drunk at the time. Theren was well aware that during off-duty periods, Tornel was told and heard things that a man of his rank was not supposed to, as a product of his privileged birth. Alcohol typically loosened his tongue. So, while Theren sipped water with food coloring, Tornel would down shot after shot of brandy.
“Not to mention, you’re Vikar’s pupil – or whatever, maybe you’re not, but they figure you are – so you’re shit out of luck. Especially after that shit at Dantooine. A lot of people liked Shyle, traitor or not, and you brought him down.” He’d taken another sip, chuckling. “It’s all a military power thing. The Emperor wouldn’t have been a part of it when he was alive, and I doubt that most top politicians are, even now. They don’t get it. But it’s a matter of pride that kids born to a low-middle-class Coruscant family don’t rise through the ranks to positions of power.”
So, that was his classification. Low-class. Born poor, raised to be a history teacher, and destined to die poor. Theren knew this, which is why something about a promotion just didn’t gel. He thrust his hands into his pockets as he walked down the hallway; out one window was a view of one of the grand, urban vistas of Coruscant. In the world’s perpetual twilight, it was rather lovely.
He caught himself when he heard his name being muttered, down the hall. Two officers brushed right past him at an intersection of two hallways, barely even noticing him. Without hesitation, he followed them at a distance just close enough to make out the gist of their conversation.
“…Gevel. He’s taken an awful lot of territory…”
“…some politician, some governor here on Coruscant, asking questions about his rank… Kroth didn’t have the guts to tell him why he hasn’t been promoted…” They both chuckled. Theren kept listening.
“…take him out of that position, move him to the outer rim or something, give him a few ships to play with… get him out of the way. Most of all, take those worlds out from underneath his command…”
Theren cursed.
Theren didn’t bother knocking on Kroth’s door before storming in, to the protests of his secretary. Another man, a captain or higher – Theren didn’t take the time to check his rank stripes – sat in front of the Admiral, and was somewhat startled by seeing the skinny, stubble-faced officer enter so abruptly.
“I’ve changed my mind, asshole. I don’t need a day to think about it. Think you can move me out to the fucking rim, remove me from my position of power, get me out of the way, do you? You can shove that promotion right up your fucking ass, sideways. And while you’re at it –”
“Mister Gevel!” Kroth thundered in protest.
“—and while you’re at it, you can tell the rest of your friends in Imperial Command to go fuck themselves.”
“You are addressing a superior officer!” Kroth shouted angrily. “I’ll have you court marshaled, you insubordinate little mongrel. How dare you speak to me like this. You are just like Vikar – all bluster and no class.”
No class. “You go ahead and try that, Admiral.” Theren scowled. “Remember? The politicians love me. You’re just a pawn to them, same as me. I’m not some upstart from the ass-end of Coruscant anymore. I’m a galactic figure, remember?” Theren smirked, and added, “And tell your idiot friends to watch their words while they’re walking around here; you never know who might be listening.”
Kamino
“I take it that it didn’t go particularly well with Kroth,” Tornel said on the Kaminoan landing pad, as Theren descended from his shuttle, pulling his trench coat about him tightly in the cold wind. “You’re early.”
“Yeah,” Theren said, following his aide towards the entrance to the large, domed facility before them. Only a few hundred meters below, raging water crashed in the perpetual storm of Kamino. “You could say that.”
They finally stepped inside. “What happened?”
“They offered me a promotion.”
Tornel did a double take, feigning surprise. “Really.”
“Really.”
“You accepted, I hope,” Tornel said, rather insincerely.
“Fuck no. Are you kidding?” Theren smirked as they continued down the obscenely clean, white halls. “Not only didn’t I accept, but I screamed obscenities at the Admiral.”
Tornel smacked his forehead. “I should have known.” They both chuckled, the ribbing accepted as brotherly. “Trying to move you to the outer rim, remove you from command of your fiefdom, here?”
“Yeah. You’ve seen this before.”
“A few times.”
They continued in silence for a moment, emerging into one of the great glass hallways that Kamino’s cloning facilities were known for. It stretched through one of the cloning chambers, with stormtroopers clearly visible throughout it, in various stages of developmental progression. “Cloning certainly has come a long way. All this in a few months.”
“Yeah,” Tornel agreed, directing his superior’s attention forward, where a white-skinned, spindly-legged lanky creature gracefully paced towards them. He bowed first to Tornel, and second – more deeply – to Theren.
“I am most pleased to make the acquaintance of Commodore Gevel,” the being said, it’s voice smooth. “Lieutenant Tornel has said much about you, and tales of your exploits are already becoming legend.”
Theren nodded respectfully.
“Commodore Gevel, as you can see, the army that you requested is well on its way to completion. Already, many units have been completed and are battle ready, preparing for your inspection.” The Kaminoan motioned for the two Imperial officers to follow him. “The warriors you provided from Karfeddion as cloning samples have proven most impressive, and the Yevethan slaves have improved progress and proven to be adept at creating excellent equipment.”
Theren nodded. “And the modifications I requested?”
“Have come along quite well. In addition to having the unique genetic patterns of the Karfeddion warriors, which has allotted them a great amount of skill, particularly in mathematics – which translates to improved fighting in urban areas, our studies have shown – the Yevethan-made armor has been improved greatly, as have the blasters they’d made. Because we have been allowed to concentrate on these units more closely instead of mass-producing them, we have been able to perfect them. You will likely only have a few thousand units to begin with, but that will be enough.” The being smiled. “Our rate of production will be slower, but worth it, I assure you.”
“That is what I have hoped for. And the color I requested, I see, has been implemented.”
“Yes. Typically we outfit our soldiers with color-neutral equipment, but your request was implemented. It was an unconventional decision, I will admit, but we fill the orders of our clients to the letter.”
And it was true. Looking out the transparisteel windows, it was instantly apparent; the legions of troopers before them all bore what appeared to be regulation Stormtrooper armor, but for one modification. All were a crimson, bloody red.
Theren smiled.
Theren paced around the room of soldiers, nodding slowly to himself. They were exemplary units. Suspended at the front of the room were empty suits of their armor, which was shot with a rifle, whose blast it held without breaking despite considerable damage.
The trooper heading the demonstration commented, in a monotone voice, “The rifles we have been provided allow increased accuracy and rate of fire. Individually, it would be only mildly significant, but when taken into account in a squad situation, the advantage is considerable.
Theren paid only moderate attention as he continued to pace around the room, inspecting his soldiers. They stood silently, straightly, not moving as he passed.
Tornel, beside him, whispered, “Why the color?”
Theren smiled. “Remember when you told me about the classification I was given by Imperial military aristocrats?”
Tornel winced in embarrassment at his loose tongue. “Yes.”
“Everyone gives classifications. To everything. Stormtroopers have been seen everywhere, as have Star Destroyers. Though they are certainly intimidating, they no longer strike the fear into the hearts of our enemies they once did. To give our forces a distinctive look provides that element of fear. They’re instantly classified by our enemies, even unconsciously, as a force to be reckoned with. Especially after we put them through their paces and show the galaxy what they’re capable of.” Theren walked to the front of the room, and immediately, the chatter of the demonstration fell silent.
“I am Commodore Theren Gevel, of the Galactic Empire, whom you serve, were created to serve, and will serve until the day you die.” Theren fell silent for a moment, smirking. The speech was all prepared, of course. “You are not normal Stormtroopers; you are better than normal Stormtroopers. You wear red, the color of battle, and you will strike fear into the heart of your foes. You are the Legionnaires.”
Theren saluted, and every one of them followed suit.
Admiral Kroth looked down at the report again, then back up at Theren, then back to the report. He seemed to be making some sort of judgment that required a careful comparison of the commodore to the datapad in his hands. “Unless you’re thinking about setting me up with that datapad, I don’t see why this is taking so long,” Theren said sarcastically. “I’ve already been debriefed.”
“Yes,” Kroth said absently, evidently ignoring what Theren was saying. Finally, he looked up. “It would seem that you rather effectively dealt with the situation in the Koornacht Cluster. And garnered us a rather impressive work force… I assume that a proper Imperial industrialization has begun?”
“Do you find it difficult to read?” Theren said in reply, and once again, Kroth did his best to ignore it.
“Needless to say, Imperial Command continues to be impressed by your efforts. You have been extremely successful in your recent endeavors… more successful, I daresay, than anyone else in the fleet.” Kroth set the datapad down after one more look. “The territory you have captured includes Bastion, Dantooine, Kamino, Karfeddion, Belsavis, N’zoth and J’t’p’tan. Quite an impressive list.”
“Yeah,” Theren said, shifting uncomfortably.
“I’ll be frank, Commodore. Your prowess has caught the eye of a number of high-ranking officials, who have begun asking questions about why you are only a commodore. I seek to rectify this situation.” Theren didn’t respond for a moment, and Kroth, perhaps assuming Theren not to have understood, added, “I am offering you a promotion.”
“To what?”
“Rear-Admiral. You will be placed under a new, larger command, and offered more… opportunities, to display your prowess.”
“I see.”
They sat there a moment more, and Kroth further prompted Theren. “Well?”
“Give me a day to think about it.”
* * * * *
In the ranks of the Empire, success did not equate to promotion or esteem. Grand Admiral Thrawn had managed to carve out an immensely impressive holding during his time as a servant of the Empire, yet had never escaped the classification he’d been allotted immediately upon his discovery; non-human. Less than human. Had it not been for the interference of the Emperor, he likely would have been left a captain for most of his life.
Classifications are, in the end, what it amounted to. Aristocrats with no intelligence and no talent were promoted to Vice-Admirals and given grand, symbolic commands to flaunt. Brilliant tacticians born in the slums of Carida commanded Corellian Corvettes. Tornel, Theren’s aide and the son of a wealthy Muunilistian banker, had once elaborated on this.
“You’re – no offense – what they call a low-class person. You weren’t born into the rungs of power. You weren’t even born into a position where the rungs of power were available for you to climb. You don’t have an Imperial accent; you don’t have wealthy, aristocratic, or military parents. That you were a scholar at one point doesn’t help either. You’ve got nothing, in their eyes.” Tornel had been drunk at the time. Theren was well aware that during off-duty periods, Tornel was told and heard things that a man of his rank was not supposed to, as a product of his privileged birth. Alcohol typically loosened his tongue. So, while Theren sipped water with food coloring, Tornel would down shot after shot of brandy.
“Not to mention, you’re Vikar’s pupil – or whatever, maybe you’re not, but they figure you are – so you’re shit out of luck. Especially after that shit at Dantooine. A lot of people liked Shyle, traitor or not, and you brought him down.” He’d taken another sip, chuckling. “It’s all a military power thing. The Emperor wouldn’t have been a part of it when he was alive, and I doubt that most top politicians are, even now. They don’t get it. But it’s a matter of pride that kids born to a low-middle-class Coruscant family don’t rise through the ranks to positions of power.”
So, that was his classification. Low-class. Born poor, raised to be a history teacher, and destined to die poor. Theren knew this, which is why something about a promotion just didn’t gel. He thrust his hands into his pockets as he walked down the hallway; out one window was a view of one of the grand, urban vistas of Coruscant. In the world’s perpetual twilight, it was rather lovely.
He caught himself when he heard his name being muttered, down the hall. Two officers brushed right past him at an intersection of two hallways, barely even noticing him. Without hesitation, he followed them at a distance just close enough to make out the gist of their conversation.
“…Gevel. He’s taken an awful lot of territory…”
“…some politician, some governor here on Coruscant, asking questions about his rank… Kroth didn’t have the guts to tell him why he hasn’t been promoted…” They both chuckled. Theren kept listening.
“…take him out of that position, move him to the outer rim or something, give him a few ships to play with… get him out of the way. Most of all, take those worlds out from underneath his command…”
Theren cursed.
* * * * *
Theren didn’t bother knocking on Kroth’s door before storming in, to the protests of his secretary. Another man, a captain or higher – Theren didn’t take the time to check his rank stripes – sat in front of the Admiral, and was somewhat startled by seeing the skinny, stubble-faced officer enter so abruptly.
“I’ve changed my mind, asshole. I don’t need a day to think about it. Think you can move me out to the fucking rim, remove me from my position of power, get me out of the way, do you? You can shove that promotion right up your fucking ass, sideways. And while you’re at it –”
“Mister Gevel!” Kroth thundered in protest.
“—and while you’re at it, you can tell the rest of your friends in Imperial Command to go fuck themselves.”
“You are addressing a superior officer!” Kroth shouted angrily. “I’ll have you court marshaled, you insubordinate little mongrel. How dare you speak to me like this. You are just like Vikar – all bluster and no class.”
No class. “You go ahead and try that, Admiral.” Theren scowled. “Remember? The politicians love me. You’re just a pawn to them, same as me. I’m not some upstart from the ass-end of Coruscant anymore. I’m a galactic figure, remember?” Theren smirked, and added, “And tell your idiot friends to watch their words while they’re walking around here; you never know who might be listening.”
* * * * *
Kamino
“I take it that it didn’t go particularly well with Kroth,” Tornel said on the Kaminoan landing pad, as Theren descended from his shuttle, pulling his trench coat about him tightly in the cold wind. “You’re early.”
“Yeah,” Theren said, following his aide towards the entrance to the large, domed facility before them. Only a few hundred meters below, raging water crashed in the perpetual storm of Kamino. “You could say that.”
They finally stepped inside. “What happened?”
“They offered me a promotion.”
Tornel did a double take, feigning surprise. “Really.”
“Really.”
“You accepted, I hope,” Tornel said, rather insincerely.
“Fuck no. Are you kidding?” Theren smirked as they continued down the obscenely clean, white halls. “Not only didn’t I accept, but I screamed obscenities at the Admiral.”
Tornel smacked his forehead. “I should have known.” They both chuckled, the ribbing accepted as brotherly. “Trying to move you to the outer rim, remove you from command of your fiefdom, here?”
“Yeah. You’ve seen this before.”
“A few times.”
They continued in silence for a moment, emerging into one of the great glass hallways that Kamino’s cloning facilities were known for. It stretched through one of the cloning chambers, with stormtroopers clearly visible throughout it, in various stages of developmental progression. “Cloning certainly has come a long way. All this in a few months.”
“Yeah,” Tornel agreed, directing his superior’s attention forward, where a white-skinned, spindly-legged lanky creature gracefully paced towards them. He bowed first to Tornel, and second – more deeply – to Theren.
“I am most pleased to make the acquaintance of Commodore Gevel,” the being said, it’s voice smooth. “Lieutenant Tornel has said much about you, and tales of your exploits are already becoming legend.”
Theren nodded respectfully.
“Commodore Gevel, as you can see, the army that you requested is well on its way to completion. Already, many units have been completed and are battle ready, preparing for your inspection.” The Kaminoan motioned for the two Imperial officers to follow him. “The warriors you provided from Karfeddion as cloning samples have proven most impressive, and the Yevethan slaves have improved progress and proven to be adept at creating excellent equipment.”
Theren nodded. “And the modifications I requested?”
“Have come along quite well. In addition to having the unique genetic patterns of the Karfeddion warriors, which has allotted them a great amount of skill, particularly in mathematics – which translates to improved fighting in urban areas, our studies have shown – the Yevethan-made armor has been improved greatly, as have the blasters they’d made. Because we have been allowed to concentrate on these units more closely instead of mass-producing them, we have been able to perfect them. You will likely only have a few thousand units to begin with, but that will be enough.” The being smiled. “Our rate of production will be slower, but worth it, I assure you.”
“That is what I have hoped for. And the color I requested, I see, has been implemented.”
“Yes. Typically we outfit our soldiers with color-neutral equipment, but your request was implemented. It was an unconventional decision, I will admit, but we fill the orders of our clients to the letter.”
And it was true. Looking out the transparisteel windows, it was instantly apparent; the legions of troopers before them all bore what appeared to be regulation Stormtrooper armor, but for one modification. All were a crimson, bloody red.
Theren smiled.
* * * * *
Theren paced around the room of soldiers, nodding slowly to himself. They were exemplary units. Suspended at the front of the room were empty suits of their armor, which was shot with a rifle, whose blast it held without breaking despite considerable damage.
The trooper heading the demonstration commented, in a monotone voice, “The rifles we have been provided allow increased accuracy and rate of fire. Individually, it would be only mildly significant, but when taken into account in a squad situation, the advantage is considerable.
Theren paid only moderate attention as he continued to pace around the room, inspecting his soldiers. They stood silently, straightly, not moving as he passed.
Tornel, beside him, whispered, “Why the color?”
Theren smiled. “Remember when you told me about the classification I was given by Imperial military aristocrats?”
Tornel winced in embarrassment at his loose tongue. “Yes.”
“Everyone gives classifications. To everything. Stormtroopers have been seen everywhere, as have Star Destroyers. Though they are certainly intimidating, they no longer strike the fear into the hearts of our enemies they once did. To give our forces a distinctive look provides that element of fear. They’re instantly classified by our enemies, even unconsciously, as a force to be reckoned with. Especially after we put them through their paces and show the galaxy what they’re capable of.” Theren walked to the front of the room, and immediately, the chatter of the demonstration fell silent.
“I am Commodore Theren Gevel, of the Galactic Empire, whom you serve, were created to serve, and will serve until the day you die.” Theren fell silent for a moment, smirking. The speech was all prepared, of course. “You are not normal Stormtroopers; you are better than normal Stormtroopers. You wear red, the color of battle, and you will strike fear into the heart of your foes. You are the Legionnaires.”
Theren saluted, and every one of them followed suit.