Without Direction - Asimov
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  • Posted On: Jan 1 2008 10:11pm
What a freakin' brilliant story!

From the android named Asimov, to the heart-breaking introduction to the same, through to the development of a society new; kudos. The formula may have been a bit predictable, after so many years it's hard to create a truly innovative Planetary Take-Over, but the route taken to get there - this I enjoyed greatly.

Keep up the good work.
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  • Posted On: Jan 1 2008 11:11pm
Thanks, I really tried to do what I could to produce something interesting and worth reading as I bring in a new species to TRF. Hopefully my new work with them will continue to be entertaining as I develop them and their society.
Posts: 257
  • Posted On: Jan 1 2008 11:17pm
Great read man, good job.
Posts: 184
  • Posted On: Jan 1 2008 11:49pm
Yes, good job Asimov.
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  • Posted On: Jan 2 2008 1:13am
I was just about to go post something up about this, you beat me to it Beff. Great story, really well written. I genuinely look forward to reading more.
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  • Posted On: Jan 2 2008 5:51am
Asimov = my hero.
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  • Posted On: Jan 2 2008 5:32pm
Ambitious

I look forward to reading more.