Can people please let me know what they think of this thread as it moves on. Bad criticism would be most appreciated as I'm trying to build up my role-playing ability abit and could really do with people pointing out mistakes I make.

A big thank you to anyone who does.

I'll make sure to read it.

I quite enjoyed being a part of 'Out with the old, in with the new', so I'll be sure to read this one as well.

The first post looks quite good to me.

If I had to offer some criticism, I would question your analogy to the "Reaper of Grim." Perhaps this isn't fitting for Star Wars writing?

I wasn't to sure of that bit myself Milkshake but I couldn't really think of anything else that would describe the image I had in my head.

Bwaa. I'm sorry. I have creativity block.

Meh, nothing to worry about.

Grr.

It's fine.

I put up a reply. Pretty crappy but one but a reply none the less.