For those of you that read my material, you will see that Justice Wears Jackboots is currently in its second incarnation before the next day is done there will be a third as I am thoroughly unhappy with the post.

I am trying something enw - rather than directly involve Grand Admiral Desaria in the thread from the beginning, I am going to try to tell the story from the ground level, that of a Police Lieutenant transferred from the Core into the wilds as it were to fight crime on an unprecedented scale, thereby uncovering a plot to dissolve the Empire.

I welcome any and all advice as this is sort of a pioneering step for me. I am going to try to make a more fast-paced thread than you are used to - less detail intensive and more thrilling.

Whether I succeed or fail, rest assured the effort is made with the best intention. Regardless of the result, the effort itself shall be spectacular. Wish me luck



As far as a advice and criticism, it can be either posted here or via PM.

Thank you again

Um... What?

Hes exploring a different way of writing his threads, and would like advice from veterans of the style. Instead of writing always as his core group of characters, hes using low level NPCs to tell the story.

Bravo for your exploration of new techniques, Telan.

Ah Ha!

Now I get it. I totally misinterpreted Telan's intentions.

Good luck T. You know my contact if'n you want input.

Should be interesting, indeed. I look forward to seeing your results, Telan.

Telan rocks my socks. I'm looking forward to reading it.

Telan's an excellent writer, and any new techniques promising to improve his already considerable skills will be eagerly observed.

All right - -third incarnation. Damnit