I'm assuming you're correcting Kraken.

This is what I came up with, try revising it, etc.


Following the devastating destruction the WRATH virus, the NEW ORDER has once again risen, this time outstripping its former glory. They have re-secured the worlds of the GALACTIC CORE, and have begun outward expansion once again.

Rising to meet the seemingly unstoppable NEW ORDER is the fledgling GALACTIC COALITION, a group of fringe governments joined together by a passionate hate for the EMPIRE. In a bold move, the GALACTIC COALITION has made a pre-emptive strike against the NEW ORDER, stabbing deep into the core, striking the Corillia system.

War is upon the torn galaxy once again. Taking the queue from the GALACTIC COALITION, several other governments have chosen to assault the NEW ORDER as well. The JEDI ORDER, once a symbol of peace and stability, is inactive. Splinter groups of various Force users roam the galaxy, paving their own way with their own method of teaching.

Guys, no hate propaganda here. It's bad for advetisements.

Catch a clue.

Drayson: I liked your ending.




After the heroic sacrifices of Luke Skywalker, Han Solo, Leia Organa Solo and others, the fight for freedom looked all but won.

After the fall of Grand Admiral Thrawn, it seemed like the embers of the war were finally being drowned out.

The New Republic and liberty flourished under watchful eyes of the growing Jedi Order as the Empire licked its wounds from their hidden fortress world of Bastion.

But change is a double-edged sword, and the embers flared once more..

Empire and Republic forces spent the first two years of the Rebel Faction's existence fighting each other until one ultimately faltered. Our heros scattered to the far ends of the galaxy in the wake of the approaching darkness.

The Empire rose from it's ashes to smash the dream that was the Republic. It's small life an illusion against the reality of the expanding New Order as the galaxy reeled under the iron fist of arrogance and oppression, the Jedi Order splintered and disillusioned.

In the third year of the Rebel Faction, the galaxy entered a transition period where open rebellion of the worst kind tore the galaxy asunder once more in the form of a viral threat that reduced governments and toppled empires.

Now, the great factions of the Rebel Faction Galaxy are locked in a deadly war for supremacy as old quarrels are begun anew and heroes thought long lost return to take up the mantle.





The Rebel Faction cordially invites you to share in the experience of a lifetime.

Cater?

I would just like to point out that VC hasn't done any catering for anyone...

...though Achinta is currently avaliable for childrens parties...

:grin

This is so cool. You want to see this when its' done. Will there be pictures? If so there should be plenty of fleet battles. I could try and find some scenes on the internet for you if you wanted.

Yeah! Thanks Drayson, Kaine, that's exactly what I'm looking for.

Dolash, forgive me, but, when I read your post I immediately thought of this comic:

desktopstarships.com has plenty of cool pictures.

Omnae's is the best. I was going to write something, but he seems to have covered all the bases.

Omnae's kicks ass.

Drayson's is good but I'm disappointed by the complete lack of mention of ORS. GC is hardly the driving force behind what's happening.