Question 1: The humming of the generator. Does this mean the shield is in operation thus blocking any shuttle I may send down to Agro HQ or is it just in "stand-by" mode to be deployed at a moment's notice?
Question 2: Your Gunship that is jumping.... which direction in relation to the incoming fleet (just so when my sensors note the jump, I can say which direction it left)?
Query 3: You don't have too.. but if you could describe the corporate offices as they are seen (in all their opulent glory) as if one were looking down from a shuttle I'd appreciate incorporating it.
Warning: I will be editing (probably sometime this weekend) my first posts to correct spelling errors or words inserted that only add confusion to sentences. I am finding quite a bit and it's irritating me. Just to let you know that there will be no funny business going on with this.
Unless, of course, you have a problem with this. Then I won't do it.
1) Stand-by mode. The generators are powered up, but the shield has not yet been activated.
2) The gunship is jumping 'past' the Imperial force, at an angle. If the following V is your fleet the gunship would be flying past like the following I:
V
[indent] I [/indent]
3) The Agro Incorporated Headquarters main building is dimond shaped, made of black-tinted transpristeel. The building's primary structure is taller than it is squat, so the dimond shape is better discerned from above than from below. At the two sharpest "points" (the smallest angles of the dimond) rectangular smaller wings jut outwards. These wings are about 1/3 the height of the main central structure.
4) Go ahead and edit, if you can't trust Simon Kaine who can you trust. :p
Hilter thinks he's the most intellegent, sophisticated, perfect person in the galaxy.
To his benefit or not, he simply thinks hes so much better and smarter than other people that it disgusts him when hes in a situation where someone "lesser" seems to have the "bigger gun."