Star Wars: Uncertain Paths
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  • Posted On: Nov 24 2005 1:06am
Lucasfilm and Monkey with a gun productions presents

A Long Time Ago in a Galaxy Far Far Away...


STAR WARS

Uncertian Paths

Doyae Darkstar, an unassuming young space pilot from the frigne world of garqi, is a small time cargo hauler and scout for hire. During his breif stay on the Nikto home world of Kintan, he discovers a hidden and anicent battle ground somewhere in the arid desert wastes. While exploring this extordinary site he stumbles across an ancient Jedi Holocron.

Opun activating it he suddenly feels a strange sensation wash over him, suddenly an image of a robed figure appears before him, but before the holographic image could speak, it abruptly ends and cuts off. Curious by the strange device and even more so about his connection to it, he takes it from the battle site and heads back to the spaceport.

When he launches into space he falls under attack buy an unknown force. After a heated and hectic battle, he manages to flee the system and take the artifact with him. Now with a strange group after him and a jedi holocron in his prossesion, Doyaes life has taken a turn for the worse; but this is not his only problem.

With his force senses now reveled to him, he seeks to find a jedi knight to give the holocron to and to learn about his strange connection, but will he truely join the jedi or will some one else get to him first and show him another more powerful way to weild the force ?...


(Note: This is just an Idea I was thinking of. Let me know what you guys think.)
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  • Posted On: Nov 24 2005 1:12am
MAN FINDS JEDI HOLOCRON; SHIT HAPPENS

Perhaps the most uninteresting and overused plot in all of Star Wars fiction. You fail, try again.
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  • Posted On: Nov 24 2005 1:17am
* Shrugs*
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  • Posted On: Nov 24 2005 1:22am
Everyone starts somewhere....


Not a bad start, Proto(ss).
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  • Posted On: Nov 24 2005 1:27am
Too much wrok and not enough free time can do that to you. But atleast its something to start with.
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  • Posted On: Nov 24 2005 1:28am
Yeah, if you can run with it, go ahead, but it's nothing to flail about in exhuberation over.

You gotta work it. Rumble young man rumble and the like.
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  • Posted On: Nov 24 2005 3:11am
I give it a "meh".
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  • Posted On: Nov 24 2005 4:06am
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  • Posted On: Nov 24 2005 7:46am
Mwah!

I'd watch the Lucasfilm affiliation thingy... get yourself in dutch if yah wanna, but keep that shit off of this shit.