Depending on what time zone you live in, I might not be a liar.

"Behemoth" is definitely not finished, but I wanted to go ahead and get started on the Confederation thread. Hope you don't mind.

As always: any questions, comments, or threats may be directed at me by whatever means of communication you prefer.



Oh, and Happy New Year!

I saw that you posted it up. I will read it tomorrow or Monday. You know that story will affect more than just the Coalition and Confederation yes?? Might want to just leave those faction tags out of the title.


Hope you are enjoying your holiday weekend too.

I was just trying not to mark it "Omnae", but still wanted you to know what it was for. You can fix it if you'd like; I don't think I can edit thread titles.

And oh yeah, there was that thing about that thing . . .

I guess that's what happens when I take two weeks to do something I had planned to do in two days: I forget something.

Well, as long as your Behemoth thread is flexible since I believe it takes place before the events in our thread, ok.

You've given me quite a bit of material to work with here, some of it unintentional, I am sure (or, more correctly, intentional but with unexpected consequences or, if expected, quite brilliant in adding depth and extra dimension to your faction good sir!).

The overall arc of the story will remain but the details... oh the details are going to change a little.

So much good stuff here...

The three scenes in my opening post are set relatively soon after the Battle of Vahaba, the first one being only hours after its conclusion.

I thought you wanted a prologue to cover the sort of "setup stage" before we get into the "present" of the story, and I thought the prologue would occur over the same time period as Behemoth. Maybe I misunderstood.

Just let me know if I need to adjust my thinkings.

No. You're good.

I have finished writing the post. Just got to get the formatting done and I should post tonight sometime.

I approached it from a different angle that maybe will catch you by surprise. Maybe.

;)

Sorry... have unicode issues. pissed me off. I'll have to try to post this tomorrow... to late tonight... must sleep.

God I hate unicode issues.

I have issues with unicorns all the time. Sometimes I have problems with unicron as well.

Maybe you should try some unisom?